Last Shift
Closing time at a diner that closes for good tomorrow. Rosie has news. Frank has a mop.
Good for: comedy audition, two actors, older characters
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A small-town diner, near midnight. Chairs are up on tables. FRANK, the owner, is mopping the same spot he has mopped for twenty years. ROSIE, his longest-serving waitress, is counting the register for the last time.
Characters
- ROSIE - 40s. Waitress, unofficial therapist to the whole town. Leaving for something new.
Voiced by Leda · Premium voice
- FRANK - 60s. Owner. Allergic to sincerity, terminally sentimental underneath.
Voiced by Enceladus · Premium voice
The Scene
FRANK
Register's twelve dollars over. Twenty years, never once balanced. Why start now.
ROSIE
That's because Doris pays for her coffee twice when you're not looking. She thinks you're going broke.
FRANK
I am going broke. That's why there's a 'For Sale' sign where my face used to be on the window.
ROSIE
(putting down the cash)
Frank. I got the job. The one in Portland. I start in two weeks.
FRANK
Portland. That's the one with the rain and the people who put birds on things.
ROSIE
Pastry chef. A real kitchen, Frank. They saw the pies. Your customers put my pies on the internet.
FRANK
My customers. My wifi. Technically I launched your career.
ROSIE
Technically you told me a lemon meringue was, quote, 'showing off.'
FRANK
It was showing off. It had a swirl. This is a diner, not a gala.
ROSIE
You ate three slices.
FRANK
(a beat)
Quality control. Somebody had to make sure the showing off was structurally sound.
ROSIE
Come with me. You could do mornings at the bakery. Terrorize a whole new city.
FRANK
Nah. My knees don't do new cities. Besides, somebody's gotta stay and haunt this place properly.
ROSIE
Twenty years, Frank. You gave me a job when nobody else would even take the application.
FRANK
You spilled a milkshake on the mayor your first week. Best thing that ever happened to this establishment.
ROSIE
He deserved it. He said the coffee was better at the gas station.
FRANK
(handing her the twelve extra dollars)
It is better at the gas station. Don't tell Doris.
ROSIE
Your secret dies with the diner. Lock up, old man. I'll get the lights.
Original scene written for the Line Echo scene library. Free to perform in classes, auditions, and self-tapes.
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How to play this scene
The beats
- Frank hides feeling behind arithmetic: "Register's twelve dollars over" is grief kept in a ledger.
- Rosie's news lands and he stalls: "Portland. That's the one with the rain" deflects because he heard her perfectly.
- The running joke about the pie carries the affection neither will state plainly.
- The turn to sincerity comes on "You gave me a job when nobody else would," and he answers the only way he can, through a memory.
Playing it
This is a goodbye that neither one will name. Frank's objective is to send her off without either of them crying, and Rosie's is to make him admit, once, that it mattered. The comedy is the defense, so play the warmth underneath every joke, and let the two sincere beats, "Twenty years, Frank" and "Your secret dies with the diner," actually land.
Common mistakes
- Playing for laughs only and skipping the real affection, so the ending has nothing to stand on.
- Making Frank a grump instead of a sentimental man who is allergic to sentiment.
- Going teary too soon; the restraint is what makes the two sincere moments hit.
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